Dear Teisha, I know this particular scene is difficult. I know it lets the reader into your head. It’s a dramatic scene, it’s an emotional scene, it’s an important scene…. but sadly I am not a good enough writer to write it. I have drafted it a thousand ways (I know that’s an exaggeration.) They all stink. I have so many versions of it, that now I’m lost. Can you do me a favor? Just write it yourself and I will claim it for myself…..Thanks, thanks a lot.